Teacher feedbackFeedback given by Mrs Brookes, for our music video so far:- Tweek some of the lip sync- Colour and contrast needs to be tweeked in some areas -
especially San Fran shots- Performance good but get some different sized shots- Don't understand the bus shots- Love the shot on the swing- Wonder if you could be together in some of the shots,
because otherwise see no connection.Maybe could be a sleepover or there could be some sort of
friendly break up- Many more fun shots, should the performance be serious and
the narrative be fun?Contrast between the performance and the narrative in the
colours